Napisal/a minus:nula, v sreda, 01. avg. 07

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In a silent blaze of guns, we both fell to the ground.
It tasted like a rotten grapefruit - fresh vomit in the mouth.
When we got up, the world had split right between us,
leaving us light years apart.

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Objavil/a Providence, v 04-08-2007 00:48, 1. ... Immense. Realistic, concise, powerful. I like it a lot.   Objavil/a minus:nula, v 04-08-2007 16:24, 2. ... Well thank you   Although, this is the description of one of the darkest events that took place in my life recently. Kinda not really supposed to be liked   But I leave that up to you